Friday, January 2, 2015

A second review of Embroidering Andrea

FIVE STARS     Addictive Mystery Wrapped Around Quilting January 2, 2015
Format:Kindle Edition
Embroidering Andrea continues the quilting bee based stories in the first two novels by Barbara Sullivan. The quilting bee and accompanying mystery theme draws the main character to search deeper into her own life history. The monthly bee brings the now familiar characters together for a night of quilting, but also opens up the door for murder and mayhem.

The husband and wife characters of Rachel and Matthew Lyons are an engaging couple with a relationship that seems true to life. The author shows the couple in a positive light although they can still have their difference of opinion which makes a much more pleasant read than novels that feel the need to have strong conflicts between spouses throughout a story.

The refreshing main characters offset the deep tragic lives of many of the secondary characters. Embroidering Andrea is not an easy read and the topic may be off-putting to some. However, keep reading as the story will draw you in and hold you hostage until the final reveal.

The Quilted Mystery series is well worth checking out. Hopefully the author is hard at work on the next installment.

This review is based on a complimentary copy of the novel provided by the author in exchange for our review.

My bio on Amazon's Author Central.

"Born in 1941 and raised in the then small town of Milford, Connecticut, Barbara Sullivan left the New England area to follow her Marine husband around the country and to travel far and wide before settling down in Southern California. Now a retired librarian, she worked for twenty-five years in the profession before stepping away to begin her writing career. 

Her first work in the Quilted Mystery series is Ada Unraveled. In this story Ms. Sullivan introduces her primary characters, Pi Rachel Lyons and her husband/business partner Matt Lyons. This very personal story about a woman named Ada is inspired by the author's difficult childhood and dedicated to her mother Rosalie. Here Barbara Sullivan attempts to unravel the painful emotions she endured as a growing child living in her parents' ofttimes alcoholic nightmare. 

The second book in the Quilted Mystery series steps fully into the Stowall family--the group of hand quilters Rachel Lyons has joined--telling the tale of the youngest hand quilter thirteen-year-old Abigail. The title, Ripping Abigail, is another play on sewing terms as Abigail is ripped from her childhood by the events told in this book. 

The third title in the series, Embroidering Andrea, also contains a play on quilting terms. If you've read the first two of these books you'll have already learned that Andrea Kelly, the subject of this novel, is into tats. But there is much more to learn about this title; a much deeper pain drives Andrea to carry her scars visibly on her body.

A longtime hand quilter, quilting has many meanings to Sullivan. Her earliest memories are patches of visual explosions that sewed themselves into an otherwise normal middle class family. The New England setting for those memories, with its dark and scary tales of witches and headless horsemen, only added to the sense of foreboding the author took with her into adulthood.

Barbara holds degrees in History and Library Science, and a Masters in Public Administration. You can view her quilts and learn more about her life at www.quiltmyst.com. Follow Barbara Sullivan on facebook.com and twitter.com as well."

Sunday, November 16, 2014

Four GREAT REVIEWS in 2014 for Ada Unraveled: a Quilted Mystery novel.




5.0 out of 5 stars
 
Great read, keeps you wonderingMarch 9, 2014
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This review is from: Unraveling Ada (Kindle Edition)
I loved the intertwining of the stories and the quilts and all the characters too. Loved the story line and would read it again if I didn't have so many other books waiting for me !!!

4.0 out of 5 stars A puzzle to solve....April 10, 2014
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This review is from: Ada Unraveled, a Quilted Mystery novel (Kindle Edition)
Keeps you guessing, lots of twists and turns. Never know what is going to jump out at you, the ending will surprise you.

5.0 out of 5 stars Five StarsSeptember 8, 2014
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This review is from: Ada Unraveled, a Quilted Mystery novel (Kindle Edition)
Another great story from Ms Sullivan.

4.0 out of 5 stars thoughtsSeptember 18, 2014
By 
Betty Vaughn (LAKE WYLIE, SC, US) - See all my reviews
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This review is from: Ada Unraveled, a Quilted Mystery novel (Kindle Edition)
like books that enclude my other interest.. Like quilting.. not to heavy.. easy to enjoy.

Monday, January 13, 2014

NEW 5 STAR REVIEW FOR RIPPING ABIGAIL!

Format:Kindle Edition|Amazon Verified Purchase
Wonderful story! Enjoyed it immensely with the characters and their personalities and the scattering lessons of history and gang info and of course the mystery of HE who is our higher power and the beauty and miracles that we are graced with. Loved it. Gotta like a character who can ponder GOD and his glory while getting her gun ready to creep to the rescue!!!!!! ONE thing I missed was the word ripping in the title and what it meant. 
 
Thanks Mopete 1960!

Friday, December 6, 2013

Embroidering Andrea is now live!

Embroidering Andrea went live on December 5, in Kindle format. The paperback is on the way. This is the description blurb:

"When the members of Quilted Secrets meet for their latest quilting bee in the urban loft of artist Andrea Kelly, the secrets unfurl with the quilt they are stitching and once again, retired librarian-turned-private investigator Rachel Lyons finds herself on a case involving one of her quilting sisters -- a case that takes her into the artsy, boho world of a Southern California gay enclave in search of a missing young woman."

We are really very excited to bring you this third book in the Quilted Mystery series. Rachel Lyons does it again! Find your copy of this new book on amazon.com

Thanks! And Merry Christmas and Happy New Year,
Barbaa Sullivan

Thursday, October 31, 2013

Christmas is coming...and so is Embroidering Andrea!

Still editing, but getting very close, my team of experts and I are aiming for December to publish this third installment of the Quilted Mystery novels. I know you'll love it. I know you'll want to read it the day after Christmas!

Whatever else you do in your life, have fun!

Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Another Free Day on Kindle for Ada Unraveled.

Book one of my Quilted Mystery novels will be available for FREE on Kindle July 27th. But why wait? This fascinating mystery/thriller is available now on Kindle for a mere $3.99!

Two of my readers have just given this book 5 stars (out of a possible 5). Visit amazon.com now to read them. http://www.amazon.com/Unraveled-Quilted-Mystery-novel-ebook/dp/B00D538844/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1373980889&sr=1-1&keywords=ada+unraveled+in





A Cold Day for Murder (Kate Shugak #1), by Dana Stabenow, is a masterful tale of generational conflict, of culture conflict, of the conflict between an aboriginal peoples and the moderns who are absorbing and erasing them using the ageless change makers--corruption and greed. But maybe the aboriginals are winning this one. Certainly with the help of author Dana Stabenow, the moderns are learning a new truth or two about life.

A Cold Day for Murder is a powerful tale of survival on an icy downhill slide. And Dana Stabenow is a brilliant writer filled with the passion of the Aleuts. This is her Edgar. You should have read this already. I’m racing back to amazon.com to purchase the rest of her works. I’ve just now found this splendid writer.

Oh, and yes, it is also an excellent mystery.

Tuesday, June 11, 2013

ADA UNRAVELED AND RIPPING ABIGAIL--FREE ON YOUR KINDLES

FREE on your Kindle! Ada Unraveled, Quilted Mystery novel #1. And so is Ripping Abigail, Quilted Mystery novel # 2...on the same days!



 JUNE 15 and JUNE 29!

Don't miss this opportunity to download Ada Unraveled for your Kindle, for FREE. The first book in the Quilted Mystery series begins Rachel Lyons escapades as she learns the ropes of PI work with hubby Matt Lyons.

Ada Stowall's body has been found...just days after her father-in-law's corpse stopped a group of conservationists dead in their tracks. Rachel's assignment? Solve the mystery of her death using the details sewn into Ada's last quilt, researching the family tree, and sticking her nose in where it doesn't belong.

Pushy? Sure. She's a PI. But it doesn't come naturally for this retired librarian, so sometimes she stumbles. Sometimes she gets lost.

Read this mystery-thriller with a touch of the unbelievable on your Kindle for FREE. June 15, 20 and 29.

Also free on the 15th is the second book of the Quilted Mystery series, Ripping Abigail.

Friday, June 7, 2013

ADA IS BACK, BETTER THAN EVER

Ada Unraveled is the complete, professionally edited edition of the murder of Ada Stowall. Lots of new facts, a more complete story on many levels, this book is now available on your Kindle, paperback, and coming this fall in large type. Amazon and Createspace are two online sources. Here's the blurb.

Private Investigator Rachel Lyons discovers a corpse while hiking the recently burned hillsides of Southern California. While the coroner rules the old man's death an accident by wildfire, Rachel's keen eye and instincts lead her to a more disturbing conclusion. When she gets invited to a secretive quilting group that meets not far from where the body was found, she begins to unravel a tangled web of terrible family secrets through the clues hidden in the stitches of a mysterious quilt. Her involvement with the close-knit quilters quickly becomes a dark and dangerous investigation.

Ada Unraveled will be available on your Kindle for FREE many Saturdays. And, June 15 and 20 will be the first two free days. Give this new and improved story a try. Book Two, Ripping Abigail is the continuation of the Stowall saga. Stay tuned for the third book, out next year.

Brought to you by Quiltmyst Publishing. This is the first in the Quilted Mystery novel series. A third is in the works.

http://www.amazon.com/Ada-Unraveled-Quilted-Mystery-Volume/dp/1484814150/ref=sr_1_cc_1?s=aps&ie=UTF8&qid=1370611393&sr=1-1-catcorr&keywords=Ada+Unraveled

Tuesday, May 7, 2013

RIPPING ABIGAIL At Its Best



Ripping Abigail brings a level of excellence to the world of mysteries. But this book is not just a mystery--it is also a general fiction that happens to have a protagonist who is a PI.

That protagonist is Rachel Lyons, and she also quilts. Rachel Lyons is a retired librarian as well, who loves to find answers to questions--thus the mystery genre selection. I must confess: I am a retired librarian. I love to quilt. And I love to read mysteries. You will sometimes find reviews on this site of other authors’ works. I also love to read thrillers—and Ripping Abigail is a thriller--so I add here a positive word for the books of author Lee Child.

My books, Ada Unraveled and Ripping Abigail are independently published novels, indies. I've learned a great deal over the past few years about publishing and publicizing my books, but more importantly how important proper editing of a book is. I appreciate the patience of my readers as I've moved along this continuum.

The third of my books should be even better than the first two.


Tuesday, March 5, 2013

A Beautiful Mystery, by Louise Penny--a Review

I love Louise Penny's writing. The extravagantly emotional and sensual thoughts of a now love-besotted Jean-Guy Beauvoir lift and carry us into the snowy world of a French-Canadian Gilbertine monastery, where the younger man's internal music combines and contrasts with that of his older mentor, the ever patient, stable-to-the-point-of-solidifying, Chief Inspector Gamache.

One of twenty-four monks has murdered a brother inside the cold complex of stones and secrets. And this vile act threatens to take the entire structure down. Only one of the many subtle references to present-day pressures that eternally work to unhinge our happy, peaceful lives from a comfortable old reality.

Though Gamache struggles to contain his equilibrium between the increasingly erratic Beauvoir and the perfectly evil Francoeur--who inexplicably drops in from the sky--we all know that something must give.

Beware of the mind-numbing rhythm of plainchant woven through the plot. Something jarring is this way coming. An apparent setup for the next novel, I resent the tease but know I will buy it the moment it goes into print. Because secretly I long for an end to the torment of our implacable hero Gamache, who must exist in the midst of impossible forces.

It's why he's implacable. (Spoiler alert: keep a fresh bowl of chocolate covered blueberries nearby--only understand, the real thing won't match Penny's uncanny, drool-making descriptions.)

Wednesday, January 9, 2013

From Unraveling Ada to Ada Unraveled

Coming soon is a completely rewritten, professionally edited and vastly improved first book in the Quilted Mystery series. This new volume one will be titled Ada Unraveled.

Ripping Abigail remains a great read--one you can enjoy as a standalone novel. I hope you will give it a try.

Our target date for publishing Ada Unraveled is in March.

Sunday, December 16, 2012

Peace and Love to All

For those of you who may occasionally check in to see what's happening with my writing, here's an update.

The good news is I've completed the third novel in the series. The less good news is that due to a spate of recent reviews of Unraveling Ada indicating that some changes need to be made I am once again working with my editor to bring those changes about.

Sometime this coming year I will be removing the current two books and then reissuing them under new titles and changed covers so that we can go forth anew. This was a difficult decision given that so many of my books are in circulation now. More than eight thousand UA books are in circulation somewhere. And another two thousand copies of Ripping Abigail are, as well.

The initial positive response to my first book blinded me to concerns I had over it, but now that a few more "honest" voices have come forth I'm excited to be making adjustments. I'll let you know when we begin publishing again. For now, UA and RA are still out there (due to contracts) and they have been improved once already, but there's more to be done.

Hope you all have wonderful winter holidays. We're thoroughly enjoying ours with our children and grandchildren.

Barbara A. Sullivan

Monday, May 21, 2012

Latest Ripping Abigail Review--Thanks J. Baldwin!

"Quilted Mystery fans will be glad to know that Lyons Investigations and Research is back in "Ripping Abigail," the suspenseful sequel to "Unraveling Ada." Readers are again treated to a page-turner about the deft and insightful work of Rachel and Matt Lyons and their two full-time apprentices. This time around former marine Matt, who Rache describes as a 6'2" muscular "hunk" with Paul Newman blue eyes, has sprung from his easy chair and shares the action fully.

Readers' attention will be captivated immediately by the plot which, as other reviewers have noted, takes place in southern California. The story revolves around Abigail, a previously home-schooled teenager who has decided, against her mother's wishes, to enroll in public school where she immediately encounters a chilling situation involving a local gang. Abigail's mother, Gloria, who knows Rache through their participation in a quilting bee, enlists the PI's help. From these strands, Barbara Sullivan weaves a fascinating mystery, drawing in readers and keeping them intrigued right from the start.

She adds extra dimension and richness to the work with overarching ideas that reappear throughout the book. One concept that she addresses a few times relates to the effect of immediate emotions on decision making compared to more rational behavior. Another theme is the double-edged sword of the Internet and its unequaled ability to supply and communicate information at warp speed pitted against its unparalleled ability to access information about our private lives.

Mystery aficionados, who haven't already read "Unraveling Ada," will certainly be prompted to do so after reading this book."

Friday, March 23, 2012

A Montage of Reviews for Unraveling Ada

Excellent mystery with a great female protagonist, By SMS (Los Angeles, CA)
"This review is from: Unraveling Ada, a Quilted Mystery novel (Kindle Edition)
Rachel Lyons is a welcome addition to the female detective genre. A retired librarian who is relatively new to the P.I. world, she splits her free time between quilting bees and target practice. The best part of reading this book is getting to know Rachel and her world - she's got a strong, distinct voice and she's a character that I think many mystery lovers will enjoy getting to know. No nonsense but funny, tough but vulnerable, she manages to remain completely relatable while leading the reader through a complex and exciting story. The supporting characters are varied and distinctive - each one of them seem to have their own unique stories to tell. And the quilting information is fascinating and detailed without being too overwhelming for those with no previous knowledge of the craft. Without giving too much away, the mystery itself is a fairly sophisticated exploration of family secrets and violence - it is much more than your average whodunit story. I hope this is the first of many Rachel Lyons novels."


Unraveling Ada, a darn good read., May 2, 2010
By Edward Troy (San Rafael, CA United States)
"Move over John Grisham. Make room at the table Janet Evanovich, there is a new mystery writer on the scene that will keep all detective story lovers on the edge of their seats and eagerly turning the pages of one of the most exciting new novels of this year. I'm talking about Barbara Sullivan's first book, Unraveling Ada, a quilting mystery novel published by QuiltMyst Publishing
This estrogen charged novel introduces Rachel Lyons, a Southern California mid-aged private investigator whose life will undergo a rapid and disturbing change.

The discovery of a badly burned body in the Cleveland National Forest recent firestorm and Rachel's sharp eye forensic skills starts the reader on a journey that will enlighten and delight any lover of a good mystery.

Ms. Sullivan will introduce a host of interesting characters who she meets at a start-up quilting bee. Following the squares of an old quilt and the pattern of stitches leads our heroine to startling discoveries about a series of recent murders, a very strange and disturbing family who has a host of secrets to keep hidden and forces Rachel to confront some horrible facts about her own personal life.

This reader was taken with Ms. Sullivan's intimate knowledge of the workings of today's police department and how human they can be. Good cop, bad cop, dedicated cop, lazy cop are all part of this novel. From the initial crime scent and the need to protect same to the inside of an autopsy lab this author held the reader captive with insightful and informative details of police science and the way crimes are really solved.

I would recommend Unraveling Ada to any real mystery lover. Rachel Lyons, this Croc wearing silver Rossi 38 caliber revolver toting grandma takes the reader on an unforgettable journey of a tortured family and the deep secrets that they have been trying to hide from the world.

All in all a good read, this reader highly recommends Unraveling Ada and eagerly waits for the promised sequel."


Wonderful escapism!, By Anglers Rest (Devon, England)
"I was delighted when I spotted via Amazon just before Christmas. I had high hopes for the book and I wasn't disappointed. In fact I was only about a third of the way through the book when I checked if there was another in the series, which there was!

The series, opens with the introduction of the narrator Rachel, who with her husband Matt run a private investigator business. Rachel has a background in libraries and is a quilter looking for a regular American style quilting bee. Matt is an former military man. They are pretty much the business, although they do have a small team of employee who help them complete the various contracts.

Having looked for a quilting bee without success, the participants in one contact Rachel and invite her to join. Rachel does and is somewhat bewildered with the other members. Each one seems to have a story to tell and one to hide. By the end of the first evening, a member of the group ask Rachel if they can employer her to do some investigations. Rachel, agrees and leaves the quilting be clutching a quilt, a family tree and lots and lots of questions....

The story that unfolds is not complex, but it is a story with lots of strands, much like the strands holding a quilt together. The strands come together, which culminates with Rachel being threatened. Her investigations are getting close to the truth......and generations of secrets are about to be told.

I loved this book. It has everything that I love, characters that felt like they were having a conversation with me,a good storyline and a complex genealogy.

I am currently reading the second book in the series and I hope there is more in the series to come."

Quilts, coffee and murder ... what more could you want?,By S. Rasmussen (Texas)
"Although private investigator Rachel Lyons is the main character, the book is full of interesting characters ... interesting in more ways than one! As the newest member of a hand-quilting bee, Rachel quickly finds out that she was selected to participate in order to tap her skills as an investigator. After spending an entire night quilting with seven other women, she finds herself embroiled in a dark, family mystery that takes every ounce of her intelligence to solve, and more importantly, to stay alive.
This is a page turner that grabs you right from the beginning and won't let you go until you get to the end. I can't wait to read "Ripping Abigail"."

Now on sale for $.99! on your Kindle.

Sunday, February 26, 2012

The Remaking of Unraveling Ada

So, I'm out there on Linkedin.com and someone else attacks my favorite company, Amazon.

What's wrong with Americans that we have to attack anything bigger than a small business? Amazon made the digital book a reality. Amazon makes it possible for you to publish your book (good, bad or indifferent) for FREE.

Now if you'd like to actually sell some of them, you should have a nice cover. And if you want people to keep reading your works, you should have your book edited.

That's where I fell down with my first book Unraveling Ada. After two years of trying to "catch on", and five five-star reviews, a couple from people who weren't actually friends or relatives, the new Kindle Fire combined with the new KDP Prime-Select program came together to form the perfect publishing storm.

My books "sold" almost 8,000 copies in one month. After two years of 4 or 5, finally growing to 30-31 per month. And then an honest reviewer (or five) came along. Ouch.

Now Unraveling Ada is being thoroughly edited. (Ripping Abigail already was) and it finally makes sense. It's actually reading so much better that even I'm enjoying reading it (for the 8th time, really. I enjoyed the first four reads, but after that it was drudge.)

Now here's a question I'd like an answer to. What do I do with this pickle I find myself in? Go back out with an FULLY EDITED sign on the front of the current cover? Or scratch eight years of painstaking work, kill the first two books in the series, wait six months, then resubmit them to Amazon with a whole new look and new titles?

Yes! That's what I'll do. I'll try the former approach first, then if that fails, I'll resort to the latter approach last. So please stay tuned, it's a work in progress. Maybe two more months....

Sigh. Allways have sumwon else editeding your workngs.

Maybe it's the whole David and Goliath thingy. (Go back to the first question.)

Monday, January 23, 2012

Ripping Abigail: the ABNA pitch

Bright, creative Abigail Pustovoytenko has decided that at the age of thirteen—almost fourteen—she is too old for her home school group. Mom Gloria, an immigrant from Ukraine and head nurse in Cleveland County hospital’s ICU, simply doesn’t understand her completely American daughter.

So, when an early-morning car accident on Southern California’s I-13--in which six recent graduates of Pinto Springs High School are fatally injured--captures her mother’s attention in the ICU, Abigail makes her escape to Pinto Springs High and enrolls for classes.

That's when Gloria Pustovoytenko calls private investigator Rachel Lyons and asks for her help in bringing Abigail back into the fold. Abigail and Rachel are both members of the Quilted Secrets hand quilting group, a connection Gloria hopes will allow Rachel to succeed where she has failed.

However, no one is prepared for the shocking developments on campus when the local high school gang suddenly snaps under pressure from mysterious forces and begins engaging in ever more violent acts.

As Abigail draws unwanted attention by speaking up for the victims of the escalating gang activity, Rachel and her husband and partner Matthew Lyons begin the search for clues to multiple crimes among the stitches of Abigail’s recently-completed quilt and in the neighborhoods of the Pinto Springs community. Ultimately, the imagery of that lovely quilt becomes a lifeline for more than one girl in desperate peril.

Saturday, December 10, 2011

Serial Killers and Serial Victims...

In the discussion of titles of non-fiction books that I've read as the author of psychological thrillers/mysteries, my own understanding of the serial killer (and not all psych thrillers have one) and his mindset comes more from reading great fiction writers of this genre. When I need info on this phenomenon I use the internet for a quick search of current thinking and analysis. Criminal psychology has evolved over the decades, and keeping abreast of the terminology is paramount to writing nonfiction books on the topic for present-day readers. (I majored in psychology in my distant youth.)

But for a fiction writer I feel the more important knowledge must come from the inside. No, you don't have to be a serial killer, but it helped me to have studied the subject over a period of time--and to have been raised in a family with a serial abuser.

I have a character in my Quilted Mystery series who may well be a serial killer. but he is also a serial victim. I find it equally interesting to explore the connection between what may be two sides of the same coin, criminal and victim.

It's difficult for us to accept the idea that the capacity to become a serial killer may lie in all our breasts. Equally difficult is understanding that being a victim is also serial behavior. Obsessional behavior is commonplace among humans, perhaps some aberration of the normal learning process in animals. Every teacher knows that repetition is the key to learning.

So is the serial killer trying to learn something by repeating his acts? About his nature? About his parents' natures? About something broken in his mind?

Barbara Sullivan, Unraveling Ada, Ripping Abigail.

Thursday, November 24, 2011

Read the new Quilted Mystery book!

Available now at amazon.com--the second installment of the Quilted Mystery series, Ripping Abigail. Featuring Rachel Lyons, PI and hand quilter as the lady who rashly rushes to the rescue, this story centers around Abigail P., who at the tender age of thirteen decides it's time to leave her home-school group and register herself at Pinto Springs high.

Unfortunately for Abigail, this is also the week six local boys on a weekend jaunt to Tijuana wreck their car on their return trip. Five of them die at the scene. For the next week, the school is torn with grief so overwhelming that no one sees the other, far more dangerous change happening right under their noses.

Read Ripping Abigail soon. Unraveling Ada is the first mystery in the Quilted Mystery series.

You'll also want to read Unraveling Ada at amazon.com

Sunday, November 20, 2011

Are psychological thrillers with strong language too much for Indies readers?

My first book, Unraveling Ada, is the genesis for a series. In this book, readers are introduced to Rachel Lyons, new PI and retired librarian, who becomes involved in the solving of a crime through a hand quilting group she has recently met. In the process she is changed from a happy middle-aged grandmother to someone struggling with her basic assumptions about life.

This is no granny's quilting group. The women (one of whom is 13) who gather to top-stitch each others quilts are the subjects of each of the nine novels I intend to write (7 more to go) in this series. This first book, Unraveling Ada is about Ada Stowall, the woman whom Rachel Lyons replaces after her brutal murder. On one level, it is a psychological study of a dysfunctional family who harm each other in horrible ways.

Unraveling Ada is also a murder mystery, and Rachel is partnered with her husband Matthew in their private investigations business.

The second book in the series (just released) is Ripping Abigail and it is a psychological thriller about a teenager caught up in the violence of a gang gone bad.

I chose to self-publish because I was 68 when I published my first, and I felt I didn't have time to wait to be accepted by an agent, and then wait again for that agent to find a publisher. But now I'm worried that the nature of my writing is too strong for the POD audience. What do you all think?

Tuesday, August 23, 2011

Ripping Abigail joins the Quilted Mystery series

Available now at amazon.com--the second installment of the Quilted Mystery series, Ripping Abigail. Featuring Rachel Lyons, PI and hand quilter as the lady who rashly rushes to the rescue, this story centers around Abigail P., who at the tender age of thirteen decides it's time to leave her home-school group and register herself at Pinto Springs high.

Unfortunately for Abigail, this is also the week six local boys on a weekend jaunt to Tijuana wreck their car on their return trip. Five of them die at the scene. For the next week, the school is torn with grief so overwhelming that no one sees the other, far more dangerous change happening right under their noses.

Read Ripping Abigail soon. Unraveling Ada is the first mystery in the Quilted Mystery series.

Thursday, July 28, 2011

Ripping Abigail.

If you are new to this blog, my name is Barbara Sullivan and I'm the writer of the Quilted Mystery series sold through amazon.com. My first novel is Unraveling Ada and it has been out for a year and a half. And now there is book two,Ripping Abigail.

I love writing novels and have been attempting to do so for my entire life, back as far as when I was in my first decade. My mother saved my first effort (4 pages) so that I'd know this. But life and its demands led me in another direction with my love of books, into the field of librarianship, which I enjoyed emensely for twenty-five years before retiring in 1999. A few years after that I returned to writing in earnest.

Finding a publisher at my age (69, 67 with the first book in the series) was something I felt I didn't have time for, so I self-published through amazon's CreateSpace and Kindle programs.

And now I'm beginning the process of marketing this second Quilted Mystery.
Here is the jacket copy for Ripping Abigail.

"Picking up the threads of the Quilted Mystery series that debuted with Unraveling Ada, Ripping Abigail delves into the seamy side of Southern California gang culture as bright, creative, 13-year-old Quilted Secrets member Abigail Pustovoytenko rebels against her homeschooling and enrolls herself in a high school where the local gangs are under pressure from mysterious forces and engaging in ever more violent acts. As Abigail draws unwanted attention by speaking up for the victims of the escalating gang activity, retired librarian-turned private investigator Rachel Lyons has her hands full trying to keep the rebellious, principled teenager safe while seeking to uncover the forces behind this eruption of gang violence that is overwhelming the high school and surrounding community."

I hope you'll give Ripping Abigail a read. I believe you'll find it entertaining and informative.
Enjoy!
Barbara Sullivan

Wednesday, June 8, 2011

Benefit or Curse?

One of the benefits of being a military family is that you get to move to a new locale every couple of years. That’s an average amount, couple, at first it’s more like every six months to a year. But later, when it matters the most--when your children are in high school for instance--it might only be once ever three years.

At least this was how the Marine Corps handled its personnel back twenty-five years and more ago. Maybe things are more stable now, what with all the separations. But the result of all those moves was that on our final move, to Camp Pendleton in Southern California, I announced as we entered our new and now house—“You’ll have to buy a coffin to get me to move again.”

I was tired; tired in my bones, weary in my heart at leaving good friends, exhausted with trying to start a career over and over again. And I was losing children along the way.
By then we were down to one child, having dropped off the eldest at college in North Carolina.

We were still hauling a dog and a cat, however, and even grandma Miller. Wither we went, went grandma. As it should be. She didn’t live with us, but she needed to be near us. I needed her near us, too, if for no other reason than she was a familiar bring-your-own friend and volunteer baby-sitter for all the wonderful trips my wanderlust husband and I took. She kept away the lonelies that happened whenever my Marine deployed.

But I’m way ahead of myself. Why I’m writing this post is to begin sharing some of my experiences as a “camp-follower”. To begin with, I’ll just list our moves and their approximate dates to give you a flavor of why this activity so profoundly defines a military family’s life. The second most powerful element, separations for special duty assignments, also adds to this constant uprooting. My heart goes out to the military folks today. I have no idea how they cope with the amount of separation they are dealing with now.

Our first move was from our home towns, of course, to Pensacola, FL, in 1962. While there, my young and handsome Marine was sent to three different area bases for flight training, and of course we moved each time. We rented furnished in those days, so moving was a matter of packing up pots and pans and clothes for the most part.

Our fourth move was across the country, however, to Southern California, and an air base that doesn’t even exist anymore, Santa Ana, Marine Air Station, Tustin. Here Michael trained for war, the Vietnam War. Of course, all of his training was for war, but this training was more specific, and after two years and three more moves (mostly because we’d begun our family and we needed a second bedroom), Lt. Michael Victor Sullivan left for the most hated American war in history. It was February of 1966. He didn’t return until March of 1967.

To be continued.

Monday, May 9, 2011

The power of memory in fiction writing.

Fortunately we have the internet to supplement our memories now, but any writer of fiction knows that the foundation of their tales is their store of remembrances—good and bad.

The good memories are as important as the bad, in that they allow us to bring a celebration of human life into our stories-without which those stories might lack appeal. They lighten the darker episodes. They enrich our characters with likable traits. The good memories can soften our recounting of the bad memories so that our readers are willing to endure a dark tale and not feel abused by it.

But often it’s the bad memories that motivate our fiction writing efforts, just as it is the bad memories we most often remember when contemplating distant events. If you spend any time at all revisiting your childhood you know that the occurrences you are likely to remember are the bad ones; the ones that hurt, the ones that damaged.

The ordinary, everyday activities that you enjoyed with your parents, siblings and childhood friends are often forgotten, or overshadowed, by the “bad” memories.

Our minds are drawn to moments of fear and pain in our past in much the same way we are made to gawk at car accidents as we slowly drive by them. Perhaps some survival instinct hard-wired into our psyches forces our attention to images of danger and suffering as a teaching device—so that we will remember what not to experience. The urge to see how another human is suffering can be as strong as a narcotic.

Not all of us are attracted to scenes of violence and misery to the same degree, but so many of us are that we can’t just write this behavior off as some sick abnormality in the collective human personality. But if you are drawn to the darker side, you’ll probably love a good mystery, like the ones I write.

Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Editing is Arduous

Except my editor says she had fun, even found it educational, proofing my second book, Ripping Abigail. Not once, but twice!

So here's my humble praise for the sensitive, creative and exacting work Sue Sullivan has done editing Ripping Abigail. No one could have done it so well.

Ripping Abigail, a Quilted Mystery novel, will be available through www.amazon.com by Memorial Day. I hope you enjoy it.

Wednesday, February 23, 2011

March is coming, don't be blown over by the roar.

What's really roaring around the world seems to be economic discontent. The fallout? Maybe gasoline prices around $5 a gallon. Maybe higher. Whatever, we need to be prepared.

For my husband Mike and I that has led to our decision to purchase a Prius.(Also leading to the decision is that my beloved Ford Taurus stationwagon sprung a couple of leaks after eleven years of hard driving.)

We are thrilled at the prospect of getting 48-51 mpg (highway, in town) and even though the push button technology is hard to get used to at first, and the digital dashboard is likewise a challenge, it only took us a couple of days and watching their beginner's video a couple of times to make the switch.

I still love Fords. I'll always wish my purchase could have been of an American made car. But the need was immediate. Maybe down the road we'll be able to return to our favorite car company.

Welcome to my blog on quilting and mysteries

I recently wrote about one of my grandfathers. I hope to add a piece to these posts about our family history each month. But the exciting news for me this winter is that book two of the Quilted Mystery series is almost ready to publish. Unraveling Ada is of course already in print at www.amazon.com for pb and e book through Kindle, and www.smashwords. com. But soon there will be a second book, Ripping Abigail.

My series has two underlying threads (well, there are more, but for this post I'll just concentrate on the two largest) the decades in a female life and the comparative times in American history. The first book references decade one in a girl's life and the Colonies of America. The mysteries in book one are lifted from these two threads, early childhood traumas on the one hand, and the trials of settling and surviving in very early America.

Similarly, book two aims at the mysteries encountered by a growing girl in her rebellious teens and the corresponding period of rebellion in Colonial America.

Visit facebook for more of my writing, under Barbara Sullivan, and twitter for snippets I frankly find frustrating, under QuiltedMystery.

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

January's Chores

I finally took the Christmas tree down. It's January 18th.

It seems to take longer and longer each year. I'm not sure if we're loving the winter lights more or just dreading the effort. But Mike and I enjoy the lights of Christmas for as long as we can.

In its place I'll put back my quilting display rack, an Amish-inspired wide ladder I purchased four years ago. On this quilt rack I’ll hang the retirement gift from my workmates at Oceanside Public Library—an album quilt. Machine made of red and green fabrics, it has white squares of fabric strategically placed that hold photographs of the years I worked there. I cherish this gift.

About the same size, that of a lap blanket, is the Irish quilt I made my husband Michael. Featuring the three colors of the Irish flag, it's a double sided quilt with two different renderings of the flag. The colors are green, white and orange in case you didn’t know.

And I'll display my Greek quilt, a king sized mosaic of a photo I found that depicts a typical Greek island community. We visited Poros Island once, and the white homes arrayed against the aqua blue sea caught my creative imagination. The quilt is constructed of hundreds of two inch squares, just like a mosaic.

I also still have the sunflower quilt I’ve made for my granddaughter. I call this one Sunny’s Sunflowers after her current dog. I'll give it to her when she's older, as she already has her childhood quilt from me.

To see these quilts and the others I've done just follow the Blink to Barbara’s Quilts.

Thursday, December 16, 2010

When Christmas Was Poor

There have been many times in history that celebrating Christmas was difficult, but perhaps the most notable time in U.S. history was during the Great Depression. In some ways we are revisiting that terrible economic collapse again. So now I’d like to share some personal history about a family that survived during those dark times, my grandparents and their three children—the Millers, my father’s family.

My father’s side of my childhood family was for much of their lives poor. Charles Edward Miller, my grandfather, made his living as a blacksmith. Blacksmiths didn’t just make horseshoes; they made many things that could be shaped from iron and other malleable metals of those days (in the late eighteen hundreds and early nineteen hundreds.)

However his profession was obviously tied to horses and horse carts, and as a young man Charles worked closely with these spirited beasts in other ways as well. He was following in his father’s footsteps when his father apprenticed him to a Belmont jockey trainer at the age of fifteen. Eventually, Charles Miller rode one of the horses at the Belmont Stakes racetrack, just as his father had. But jockeying was a brief interlude and what Charles really learned at the Belmont was blacksmithing.

Charles was proud of his work, which he performed out of his garage, but eventually time caught up with his noble profession and blacksmithing waned. The automobile and other changes brought on by the Industrial Revolution were to blame.

For Charles and his family of five, poverty preceded the Great Depression. I’ll forgo a history lesson here, but just a little background to put the facts in their place; first came the Great War (WW I) and then came women getting the vote and the passage of the 18th Amendment—Prohibition. Next came the Roaring Twenties (today we might call this a “bubble”—a besotted bubble) and the Stock Market Crash of ’29. This crash shoved the world over a cliff, and with a sudden precipitous drop our economy was into the Great Depression. The Great Depression lasted through the thirties until World War Two (WW II.)

Other forces were at play during this fascinating period of U.S. history, but for my purposes this is enough background.

Let me return to the thirteen years of Prohibition when the very adaptable Americans adapted. For the Miller family, already teetering on the edge of poverty, adapting to this wave of social change meant the children had to leave their formal education and go to work. Estelle, Charles’ wife, also had to turn their home into a boarding house.

My father Roland had just completed the fifth grade when he began “rum running” with his older brother Russell, from the shores of Long Island near their home. Roland’s exposure to hard alcohol and extreme fear (a lethal combo) at such a young age did him no favors. The abbreviated education was equally damaging for this very bright child. Despite these handicaps, years later he would rise to an executive position in one of our nation’s great steel companies, Glendale Steel Corporation of Brooklyn.

If Americans were lucky during these times, their lives were meager. For the unlucky, life was outright misery. Russell eventually died of alcoholism at a relatively young age in his mother’s boarding house. Roland survived longer, but suffered the same illness most of his adult life.

One more family secret, and one in which I share his pride; Charles E. Miller used to boast that he was a "half breed", part “injun”. And as proof, he offered the fact that he posed for a sculpture still standing today in Central Park. This sculpture is called The Indian and you can find pictures of it on the internet.

Research into this matter has led me to know that at least two hundred young men were paid to pose for this statue, so I must add that I have no real proof of our family’s connection to American’s first inhabitants--just a lovely fantasy.

Oh, and another side note; I still have Charles E. Miller’s anvil, and a tree stump he saved that has a horseshoe embedded in it.

And the moral of this story? America’s inventiveness and adaptability are its greatest gifts. Also, how you adapt to hard times may determine what you become for the rest of your life.

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you all.

Sunday, December 5, 2010

Back from a couple of long vacations and a Thanksgiving house full of kids and grandkids. Nothing could be better, but it does take my mind away from everything else.

My writing can be found in several places: Unraveling Ada is for sale through www.amazon.com in hard/paperback and is available on Kindle if you own one; my more current thoughts are on facebook.com, just search for Barbara Sullivan and you should find me; and of course here. If you're looking for my free chapters from Unraveling Ada, just follow the links to your right, or type www.unravelingada.blogspot.com.

I am having a wonderful life, as I hope you are all having too. Take very good care of yourself and your loved ones during this holiday season. These are lonely times for some; they need your hugs, so be sure to reach out. Hugs are cheap.

Joy to you all,
Barbara

Thursday, November 18, 2010

A visit from relatives

I hope your homes will be full of friends and relatives this Thanksgiving, just as mine will be. I expect to stuff them all fuller than my turkey.

Wednesday, November 17, 2010

List of thanks...

I have a list, we all do, so let's get started.

First, I give thanks for living in a free, rich and healthy United States.
Second, for having a loving husband, two loving daughters and two loving sons through marriage, and for four healthy, loving, happy, well adjusted, and smart as whippersnappers grandchildren.

I give thanks that our government is made up of mostly thoughtful, caring people who want our country to be better.

I also want to give thanks for the plethora of good reading that I find all around us.

And of course, to those of you who have read my first book, Unraveling Ada, I give a special thanks.

But I do have one regret that I add in the hope that by doing so it will end up on next year's list of thanks: with the near demise of print media, especially small, local newspapers, we have lost our watchdogs over our local governments. This is no more apparent than here in California--where some of those so-called public servants are paying themselves hundreds of thousands of dollars annually. So to my annual prayer of thanks I add a wish that everyone would subscribe to their local newspapers today--so that they may hire an extra reporter to watch those dogs. Without your financial support, these guardians of our freedom may cease to exist.

And one small prayer: for all those women and children worldwide who suffer under oppression and violence, I pray for their release.

Have a wonderful Thanksgiving, and eat lots of wholesome food. Try some home cooking for the best possible flavors!
Barbara

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Trouble with G-mail

Unfortunately someone has hacked my G-mail account and sent out advertisements for Apple iPads. I do not own an Apple iPad, and don't advertise anything but my book, Unraveling Ada, a Quilted Mystery Novel.

Thank you for understanding that I have no control over spam or hackers.
Barbara Sullivan

Tuesday, October 12, 2010

Visiting grandchildren and other wonderful humans...

The weather up here a mile above the rest of you has turned decidedly wet and cool. Must be fall.

For those who don't know what my website is about, a reminder that I am the author of Unraveling Ada, a Quilted Mystery novel. This wonderful tale about one of the women in a group of quilters who goes missing and ends up dead, and how three of the other quilters go about solving her murder, is a five star mystery listed on www.amazon.com and www.barnesandnoble.com. Only a handful of months more and the second in the series will be out, so you might want to hurry and read the first now. It all makes so much more sense when read in order.

Again, the book is Unraveling Ada by Barbara Sullivan, available at amazon.com.

Back to the mile-highers: all four grandchildren are well, their parents are too, as are we two grandparents, Mike and Barbara. Life doesn't get better. Our next stop is Florida for a visit with high school buddies and then back home to the goldfish and one koi. Of course white Fang is traveling with us some of the time. Unfortunately he doesn't fit in a plane seat so he'll be left behind for the Florida leg.

Book Two, Ripping Abigail, is almost complete! Be looking for it soon.

Keep healthy,
Barbara

Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Chapters 1-20 of Unraveling Ada Still Available

Use the "Blinks" on the sidebar to travel to Unraveling Ada, and select the chapters you wish to read from that site.

My second book, Ripping Abigail has hit a speed bump, but I'm back at editing it now and will have it published around the end of the year. Hope you are all well and happy and loving the mysteries of life.
Barbara Sullivan

Monday, July 19, 2010

Changes

It's my impression that there are no regular followers of my blog. With all the copyright issues we are having today in the world I have made the painful decision not to continue to load my book entirely on my blog. I apologize for making this change. My book is still available through Amazon.com. After the publishing of my second book the prices will be lowered. Please keep this in mind. If I'm incorrect in my assumptions you may contact me through gmail.com at quiltmyst.

Thanks for understanding.

Saturday, July 10, 2010

Chapter's 1-22 of Unraveling Ada now available to read

Just go to the link for Unraveling Ada and select the chapters you want to read. Enjoy.
Barbara

Wednesday, June 30, 2010

My Fourth of July

Just before the turn of the nineteenth century my grandfather Carl Nim was traveling across the Atlantic Ocean with a sense of excitement in his heart. Only his journey wasn’t made on a travel ship. He was a young sailor on a merchant ship bound from Denmark to the USA.

He was thirteen, and must have been at least a little frightened given his plans.

When he hit New York harbor he completed his chores and went on leave, slipping easily into the slums and back streets of the late 1890’s New York. He never returned to the ship. He hid inside the busyness of that other turn of the century world for many years before emerging as a young man fit for my genteel grandmother Ivy. I have letters that attest to her love for him.

All of our ancestors made their way to these beautiful lands in a manner similar to my grandfather Carl, whether you know about their trip or not.

I know this country is in trouble because of the influx of people across our southern borders, but my hope for this 4th of July is that we can gentle our reactions to this growing change. There are no walls that can’t be broken down or slipped around, over or under. And as world populations continue to expand without restraint more and more desperate people will turn to a rich and largely vacant America for hope.

We must find acceptable solutions for this truth.

Another thought: I realize now that my personal memory reaches into three different centuries, made possible because of the plenty of our country and modern medicine. Isn’t America wonderful? Shouldn’t we therefore all celebrate it?

And may I finally recommend the Daughters of the American Revolution as an excellent place to begin a search for your heritage.

Saturday, June 26, 2010

Chapter 20 of Unraveling Ada now available to read.

Follow the Blinks to Unraveling Ada and select the link to Chapters 16-20. This is another Eddie Chapter. Things are changing for him very rapidly.

Saturday, June 19, 2010

Chapter 19 of Unraveling Ada now available.

Rachel gets to experience an autopsy up close and personal as she fantasizes a love match between Dr. Karen Bridle and the county Medical Examiner. Jake Stowall is the uninvited death of the party (as opposed to life) while the suspicious Detective Learner plays his malevolent role perfectly.

If you haven't yet read Unraveling Ada, this is the time to begin. The Prologue and first nineteen chapters are available for free.

If you prefer to read the entire book you can purchase it at amazon.com, or check it out from your public library.

Have fun!
Barbara Sullivan

Saturday, June 12, 2010

Chapter 18 of Unraveling Ada now posted.

Luke is back and Eddie is terrified.

Follow the Blink to Unraveling Ada, then select the appropriate chapter.

Purchase Unraveling Ada at amazon.com, barnesandnoble.com, or where ever books are sold.

Give your library a try as well.

Have fun.
Barbara

Friday, June 4, 2010

Chapter1-17 now available to read.

Just follow the link, Unraveling Ada to the chapter you want to read.

Unraveling Ada just received another five star review! Give it a try.

Saturday, May 29, 2010

Chapter 16 now posted.

Part Two, Chapter 16 is now up and available for you to read. Follow the Blink to Unraveling Ada, and then to Chapter 16 thru 20. Have fun!

Friday, May 21, 2010

Find Chapter 15 through the Blinks

Follow the Blink for Unraveling Ada. At Unraveling Ada's page, select the appropriate Blink to continue reading for free. I hope Spring is as beautiful where ever you are as it is at my house. Every flower in my garden is in love.

Enjoy,
Barbara

Sunday, May 16, 2010

Fourteenth Chapter of Unraveling Ada Now Available

I've uploaded the fourteenth chapter of my first book, Unraveling Ada, a Quilted Mystery novel. You may read the book up to and including that chapter for free, or travel over to amazon.com and purchase Unraveling Ada anytime you wish.

I'm three quarters of the way through the rewrite on Ripping Abigail. It's a ripping good story!

Have fun,
Barbara

Saturday, May 1, 2010

Chapter 12 Now Available

Just follow the links to Chapters 11-15. Enjoy!

Saturday, April 10, 2010

Editing a Fiction Book

My thanks to the man who posted this information on one of the writing boards I visit, and whose name I've long ago forgotten—and was probably one of those user id’s that made no sense, anyway.

This is a brief list of issues an editor of fiction writing must look for in order to be an effective editor. From my vantage point as a writer, I use this list as a self check on whether my outline is well designed. And I also use this as a guide as I go through second and third rewrites.

LACK OF SUFFICIENT DEVELOPMENT IN THE CENTRAL CONFLICT:
This area is concerned with the amount and flow of information a reader is receiving regarding the central conflict of the novel. Does enough happen with/to the main characters regarding the central conflict to satisfy the reader? And related to this, is the "flow" of information about the central conflict broken too often with asides and irrelevancies--little side trips our creative minds like to take? If the answer is yes, the reader won't continue to read.

That by the way is one of the tests: did you put the book down and walk away...

VIEWPOINT:
Does your writing stick to the viewpoint of one character through each scene? Flipping from character to character within the same scene confuses a reader to the point of...you guessed it, putting the book down and walking away.

Using more than one "voice" within a book is also very tricky. One way to cue a reader as to which "voice" or character is speaking at any given time is to switch from first person narrative to third person when changing characters. There are other ways as well.

MECHANICAL PROBLEMS:
This area concerns itself with paragraphs and grammar.

Paragraphs: Where you split your prose into paragraphs is akin to a comic's sense of timing. Your writing can become dramatic spotlights when paragraphs are handled correctly. Note in your favorite author’s writing how and when their most exciting paragraphs begin and end. But be careful not to over use this technique.

And she cried.
And she sobbed.
And she made me…stop reading.

Grammar: Of course this is spelling and punctuation, something any good word processor will help you with (like MS Word--where red underlined words are misspelled and green underlined phrases are not punctuated correctly or they are incomplete sentences. Don't ignore your word processor's messages.)

Note the “help you with” comment above: homonyms are an exception. Deer and dear, bare and bear, they’re and their and there, are only three homonyms that word processor won't catch.

OTHER:
Over Use OF PASSIVE VOICE.
This is an area I'm trying to improve in. This is an area I am improving in.

And not fully explaining yourself. I've added to this list a bad habit of mine because my mind moves too quickly for me to keep up with. Have I said something that needs a lead in, an explanation? Have I left a step out in the sequence of my logic? Have I explained my points completely? Have I included enough detail to inform the reader well; and the adverse, am I over explaining? (Like maybe now.)

Cover blurbs must match the actual content of the book. Don’t think that you can sell more books just by appealing to a wider audience. If you’ve written a book about strawberries, don’t try selling it to plum lovers. It will just damage your credibility.

OH, AND BY THE WAY
Chapter 9 of UA is now up and running.

Friday, April 2, 2010

Chapter 8 is now available.

Read Unraveling Ada online. Just follow the "Blinks" to Unraveling Ada and then to the individual chapters. The prologue and first eight chapters are now available for you to read.

Just received another five star review at Amazon.com. Here are all three of the reviews so far.

4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars Excellent mystery with a great female protagonist, December 14, 2009
By SMS (Los Angeles, CA) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Unraveling Ada (Kindle Edition)

Rachel Lyons is a welcome addition to the female detective genre. A retired librarian who is relatively new to the P.I. world, she splits her free time between quilting bees and target practice. The best part of reading this book is getting to know Rachel and her world - she's got a strong, distinct voice and she's a character that I think many mystery lovers will enjoy getting to know. No nonsense but funny, tough but vulnerable, she manages to remain completely relatable while leading the reader through a complex and exciting story. The supporting characters are varied and distinctive - each one of them seem to have their own unique stories to tell. And the quilting information is fascinating and detailed without being too overwhelming for those with no previous knowledge of the craft. Without giving too much away, the mystery itself is a fairly sophisticated exploration of family secrets and violence - it is much more than your average whodunit story. I hope this is the first of many Rachel Lyons novels.

2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars We Dance Round in a Ring and Suppose, While the Secret Sits in the Middle and Knows - Robert Frost, February 17, 2010
By Cherise Everhard (Michigan, USA) - See all my reviews
(TOP 500 REVIEWER) (REAL NAME) (VINE VOICE)

This review is from: Unraveling Ada: a Quilted Mystery novel (Paperback)
Retired Librarian, Rachel Lyons, has begun a new chapter in her life. With her retired Marine husband, Matt, they have started a Private Investigating business and recently relocated to California. When Rachel stumbles across a dead body it is assumed by most that he is just another victim of the recent forest fires that tore through the county. But Rachel isn't so sure.

Rachel is a hand quilter and has wanted to find a group of women to sew with. Because she hasn't made any real formal attempts at finding a quilting bee, and really hasn't expressed an interest publicly, she is a little concerned when she receives a phone call inviting her to join a quilting bee. After a little research on the internet about the bee that call themselves Quilted Secrets, Rachel decides to join the group. What she finds is a group of women, of various ages and interests, full of secrets and bonds that Rachel only gets a brief glimpse of before she is asked to look into the recent death of their quilting friend, Ada. She is handed Ada's last quilt and a genealogy of the Stowall family to begin her investigation.

Unraveling Ada is a complex and intriguing read that had me fighting myself so I wouldn't skip to the end and spoil the outcome. With every discovery Rachel makes it seems to add a dozen more questions to life of Ada and the lives of the Stowall family. Each discovery is met with either hostility or help from the other members of the Quilted Secrets, making the reader all the more interested into the why's of the story.

I am not a quilter so I thought I may get bored or lost whenever that entered into the story, instead I found the opposite happened. The author does a fantastic job of informing the reader and at the same time keeping them entertained. It's not a ton of quilting jargon thrown at the laymen, just enough to entice, enlighten and enhance the mystery. Quilting was a big part of Ada's life and her last legacy before dying; it's an essential element to the story. The lives of the women, the Stowall family, the tragedies of the past and present, are all tied together in this wonderfully written tale. I really loved it.

I still have a few more questions after closing this book, but hope the next book will come with some answers for me. The characters in this story leave an impression and I look forward to unraveling the next mystery with them.


Cherise Everhard, February 2010


5.0 out of 5 stars Curiosity has its own reason for existing -- Albert Einstein, April 2, 2010
By J Baldwin - See all my reviews
Amazon Verified Purchase(What's this?)
This review is from: Unraveling Ada (Kindle Edition)
Whether or not you are a quilter, you will find lots to like about this debut novel by Barbara Sullivan. She uses her own love of quilting -- and she is a master at that art -- as a vehicle to draw you into the mystery of Unraveling Ada. Barbara is a great crime writer and knows how to build suspense and enrich the story with good details. She has a wide range of interests and touches on many different topics which keep her readers turning the pages while wondering how the story ends. Barbara was inspired to write this book by materials left to her by her mother and intends to continue exploring Ada's story in future books. Keep tuned; Barbara Sullivan is sure to develop a devoted readership.

Friday, March 26, 2010

Correction

I've just changed the way you can find Unraveling Ada--the free online version, by removing the blog that was titled "Unraveling Ada, One Chapter a Week". It was slowing you all down.

Now when you enter the main page for Unraveling Ada you will see two choices on the right hand side: one to read the book online (one chapter a week, we are currently up to Chapter 7) and one to purchase the book.

Have fun...I think you're well into the mystery now.
Barbara

Saturday, March 20, 2010

Chapter 6 is up.

Back from a wonderful visit with my grandchildren and working feverishly on my second book. My garden is shaping up nicely too.

Follow the Blinks to Unraveling Ada, One Chapter a Week to read my book online.
Barbara

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Chapters 1-5 Now Available.

Just follow the blinks to Unraveling Ada/One Chapter a Week to read the prologue and first five chapters of my book.

Saturday, March 6, 2010

Chapters 1-4 Are Ready!!

I'm at a wonderful Creative Memories workshop in Colorado Springs hosted by my favorite CM consultant, Julie Beck. She has been kind enough to let me introduce my fellow scrapbookers to my novel, Unraveling Ada.

Scrapbooking is one of my hobbies, quilting of course is my main one.

Well, plus, spoiling my grandchildren. Traveling with Grandpa. Taking my dog for long walks. Gardening....

You get the picture. But in case you don't, there's really no need to retire when you retire.

Follow the links to Unraveling Ada, and then UA One Chapter A Week to locate the currently available chapters.

See you next week with the next one.

Barbara

Saturday, February 13, 2010

Introducing Unraveling Ada: One Chapter a Week

Starting on Valentine's Day, 2010, I will post one chapter a week of my book, Unraveling Ada. So if you choose you may read it on your computer. Since there are 53 chapters (including the Prologue) it will take slightly over a year for the entire book to be available on my blog. By then I will have published my second book.

Of course, you can still purchase a copy in paperback or for your Kindle any time you wish.

Thanks for visiting. Follow the Blink to Unraveling Ada, and from there to Unraveling Ada, One Chapter a Week.

Have fun.
Barbara

Monday, January 18, 2010

Marketing for Mice and Other Cute Things

I learned my marketing skills working in a public library. I still carry some of the concepts in my head. Thought I'd share a few of the basic rules, paraphrased.


Toddlers have a ten second attention span. Simplicity and bright colors are the key.

Kindergartners have a thirty second. The above, plus an interesting subject are the key (trains, cars, baking cookies, dragons....)

The life expectancy of an advertisement is 45 to 60 seconds. All of the above, plus adult content teasers....

Only newborns and zombies watch an entire infomercial, especially if it has a beat. For a one hour infomercial use the kindergartner's rules and repeat one hundred and twenty times changing the colors and shapes.


Summary:

It you don't catch the toddler's attention you probably haven't lost much; toddlers don't have any money anyway.

Kindergartners have a little money, so if you catch the kindergartner's attention your product should be a cheap consumable. Next week he can return with his allowance and buy another one.

Newborns and zombies are too much work. Forget about them.

Focus on the advertisement if your product has any intellectual value at all. If you must skip the adult content teaser, add in adorable children or cuddly wild animals or magic tricks. Jokes are good too. Remember, your intended audience is smart(er).

Friday, January 8, 2010

Genesis of a Title

It took me six years to write Unraveling Ada. One of the reasons is that I was determined to get it right this time. Another reason: finding my voice.

Once upon a time books were written in one of three voices (at least, as I remember it): first person with one character seeing all the events on a very personal level, third person with one character but with a less personal voice, and third person with what some course in literature I took eons ago called the God's view. This third format allowed the reader to see the events in the book from the view of various characters at various times and places.

The first three years I was writing what I then called The Golden Comforter I used the second approach—a third person accounting of one character’s experience. Until I started noticing how the rules had changed in many of the current books I was reading. I was finding novels with one strong first person character narrating while other side characters entered as necessary to widen the reader’s understanding of what was going on.

In Golden Comforter, I first wrote an entire book covering all nine quilting bees, each one with its own distinct story, but all of them connected by the Stowall family secrets. I finally had to admit that mysteries just shouldn’t take nine months to solve. At least I couldn’t bring it off.

So I switched gears and broke The Golden Comforter into nine potential books. And then I named the first for Ada, the missing quilter in the book. At first I titled it Ada’s Quilted Secret, because some of her secret is contained in her final quilt. But I settled on Unraveling Ada because it spoke to the central theme of quilting and secrets without leaving the reader thinking they were about to enter a romance. As those of you who have read the book know, this story is not a romance. It is a very complex and even dark mystery.

At any rate, in the end I decided the first person approach worked best for me, especially since I was able to add another voice. That of Eddie's. To read the first chapter (actually the Prologue) follow the link to Eddie's Voice under my Blinks.

Sunday, November 22, 2009

With a little help from my friends....

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My first novel, Unraveling Ada, is finally published.

But getting there was a saga--and it began when I was somewhere between eight and ten years old. I thought for those of you who have discovered this blog through my book I would answer some questions you might ask about my work. (The rest of you might want to visit my Blinks.)

First question you might ask me about my writing is “why?” (as in where, when, how...) And I can only answer by saying "always."

I wrote my first full novel when I was in my twenties. I remember it being a science fiction, but I don't remember the title. I remember being politely rejected by one publisher (you could actually submit your full manuscript directly to a publisher in those days). I threw it in the trash on Gum Branch Road. Tore it into quarters first.

My second book was a horror…both literally and literarily. I called it The Black Box. That was in my thirties. After one rejection I stuck it in a drawer.

And my third was a fantasy novel called Fear Beast. That one is in the same bureau drawer with The Black Box.

Then I wrote some short stores, finally deciding I should begin at the beginning as in start small and work my way up. I tried publishing a few of them in magazines. More rejections. You can take just so much rejection, so I gave it all up.

After my mom died I began going through the boxes of her personal affects. (They'd been hiding in our basement for a few years so I wouldn’t have to deal with them.) I found a treasure trove of love letters from my grandmother Ivy to her husband Carl. And letters from Ivy’s sister Luella when Ivy was only five years old. And later, a letter from Ivy’s brother Charlie. I have a story to tell someday about Luella, who died or disappeared quite young, and her brother Charlie. But not now.

Anyway, it was in one of those boxes that I found a four page (smallish pages) short story written in a young child’s messy handwriting--that I’m very familiar with. I still scribble like a seven year old. (Or am I insulting seven year olds?)

It was an undated murder mystery, and my mom had kept if for me to find. The next week I sat down and began my fourth full novel. That was six years ago.